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17 January 2018
- 16:5616:56, 17 January 2018 diff hist +15 m Task List/battle lv0 better wording
16 January 2018
- 21:0721:07, 16 January 2018 diff hist −3 m Task List/wonder lv6 comma splice
- 20:1720:17, 16 January 2018 diff hist +4 m Task List/trade lv3 edit on my last edit
- 20:1420:14, 16 January 2018 diff hist +5 m Task List/trade lv3 misplaced modifier
- 20:1320:13, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/wonder lv2 comma splice
- 20:1320:13, 16 January 2018 diff hist +2 m Task List/wonder lv1 unnecessary comma. also, it's a special kind of trading, not a special kind of page.
- 20:1120:11, 16 January 2018 diff hist −1 m Task List/trade lv6 consistency: have a space at both sides of an ellipsis or neither
- 20:1120:11, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/trade lv5 "--" vs "-"
- 20:0620:06, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/trade lv4 comma splices
- 20:0220:02, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/trade lv1 "once" means there should be a comma there. current
- 20:0020:00, 16 January 2018 diff hist +6 m Task List/shelter lv6 comma splice.
- 19:4519:45, 16 January 2018 diff hist +4 m Task List/shelter lv3 comma splice. missing comma
- 19:4319:43, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/shelter lv2 comma splice
- 19:4219:42, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/shelter lv1 comma splice current
- 19:4119:41, 16 January 2018 diff hist −3 m Task List/summon lv6 "as" implies that there will a direct effect. the way that this is worded, the effect is not directly related enough (it's hard to explain)
- 19:4019:40, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/summon lv5 consistency: either always capitalize "unlocks" or never
- 19:3819:38, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/summon lv1 comma splice
- 19:1019:10, 16 January 2018 diff hist −1 m Task List/summon lv1 unnecessary comma
- 19:0819:08, 16 January 2018 diff hist −1 m Task List/scour lv7 consistency: have a space at both sides of an ellipsis or neither
- 19:0819:08, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/scour lv5 comma splice
- 19:0719:07, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/scour lv4 awkward when seperated
- 19:0719:07, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/scour lv3 comma splice
- 19:0319:03, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/megaevo lv1 "-
- 19:0119:01, 16 January 2018 diff hist +4 m Task List/evo lv6 awkward colon and bad capitalization.
- 18:5918:59, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/evo lv5 "whom" is the object of "know"
- 18:5818:58, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/evo lv3 comma splice
- 18:5618:56, 16 January 2018 diff hist −1 m Task List/hatch lv10 consistency: have a space at both sides of an ellipsis or neither
- 18:5518:55, 16 January 2018 diff hist +14 m Task List/hatch lv8 sentence fragment
- 18:5418:54, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/hatch lv7 comma splice. independent clause.
- 18:5218:52, 16 January 2018 diff hist +4 m Task List/hatch lv6 comma splice
- 18:5018:50, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/hatch lv5 "awhile" means a short time. "a while" means a long time. there was a comma splice in the last sentence
- 18:4818:48, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/hatch lv3 comma splice
- 18:4818:48, 16 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Task List/hatch lv2 surprisingly, there is a difference between "-" and "--"
- 18:4418:44, 16 January 2018 diff hist −1 m Task List/acts lv4 surprisingly, "because" is not a conjunction; it does not need a comma and it is incorrect if it has one.
- 18:4318:43, 16 January 2018 diff hist −4 m Task List/acts lv2 consistency: either always put quotation marks around button names, or never.
- 18:4118:41, 16 January 2018 diff hist −5 m Task List/acts lv1 "when" makes that clause dependent. there needs to be something after "someone". also, "then" is not a conjunction; it can't be used like one.
- 18:3918:39, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/tutorial step4 the last clause is an independent one; it can't just be smashed together with another sentence. it needs a conjunction or a semicolon. i believe a semicolon works better here.
- 18:3718:37, 16 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Task List/tutorial step3 "keep it up" is an independent clause and can not be connected with the rest of the sentence with a comma. the sentence after that was a dependent clause that was all on its own.